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The Version We Deleted

Seventeen-year-old Bea Carter cuts eleven minutes from a highlights edit of a charity event to protect her brother. When her former friend Rowan disappears, the footage becomes part of a police investigation. Bea knows what she took out. She is less certain about what she actually saw. A young adult thriller about family loyalty, private lives and the choices behind every version of a story.

About 5 hr 35 min · 44 chapters

Themes and content

  • Disappearance
  • Family loyalty
  • Suspense

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Novel · 44 chapters · 70,282 words

Available languages: Nederlands, English

AI-assisted novel, read and edited for language and continuity by the AI assistant. Independent human native-language review remains pending.

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In the version I sent to the school, my brother never came through the door.

There was no cleverness to it. I put a marker at nine minutes past the hour, changed my mind, moved it back another three, and lifted out the whole gap between the speeches and the band. Nobody needed eleven minutes of an empty stage. Nobody had paid five pounds to watch a man in a fleece try to connect a keyboard.

The cut made the evening look better organised than it had been. That was the job.

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Chapters · 44 chapters
  1. 01The Cut11 minutes
  2. 02Someone Else's Friday11 minutes
  3. 03A Bag Without a Boy10 minutes
  4. 04What Sam Took8 minutes
  5. 05The Girl Behind the Camera10 minutes
  6. 06Search Party9 minutes
  7. 07Unfinished Work9 minutes
  8. 08The Maintenance Gate9 minutes
  9. 09The Things We Say for Family10 minutes
  10. 10An Empty Seat8 minutes
  11. 11The Wrong Kind of Quiet7 minutes
  12. 12Sunday Water8 minutes
  13. 13Original Sound11 minutes
  14. 14Restricted Funds10 minutes
  15. 15You Weren't There9 minutes
  16. 16After the Correction9 minutes
  17. 17A Good Reason Isn't Proof8 minutes
  18. 18The Letter in the Folder7 minutes
  19. 19The Place We Learned to Swim9 minutes
  20. 20The Other Application8 minutes
  21. 21Somebody Else's Words8 minutes
  22. 22The Version I Preferred9 minutes
  23. 23The Offer8 minutes
  24. 24Gold Under Black8 minutes
  25. 25A Door Everyone Used7 minutes
  26. 26The Phone on the Table7 minutes
  27. 27Please Don't Share6 minutes
  28. 28Terms of Help7 minutes
  29. 29Borrowed Things6 minutes
  30. 30What the Room Heard7 minutes
  31. 31The Room Upstairs7 minutes
  32. 32A Very Public Friend6 minutes
  33. 33The House on Birch Road6 minutes
  34. 34The Missing Card7 minutes
  35. 35No More Borrowed Truths6 minutes
  36. 36Until the Phone Rings7 minutes
  37. 37The Person in the Doorway6 minutes
  38. 38What Was Still There8 minutes
  39. 39The Service Path6 minutes
  40. 40An Unedited Answer11 minutes
  41. 41The Part After7 minutes
  42. 42A Film for Four People7 minutes
  43. 43What Sam Keeps9 minutes
  44. 44The Last Frame12 minutes

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